All in a Pen

December 31, 2000, 9:38 pm

It lay there. Unused.The simbol of a mindgone blank under pressure.Positioned preciselyalong the top edgeof the blank page.Nearby, a rumbled headwith eyes tracing ceiling patternsuttered soft moans...

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Re: All in a Pen

December 31, 2000, 9:48 pm

Nice R, good effect and steady read. Thank youChris

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December 31, 2000, 9:57 pm

Thanks Rg, you penned that off quick Why don't you visit -All in a pen

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Re: All in a Pen

December 31, 2000, 10:08 pm

Garfield,change it to symbol.d.

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Re: All in a Pen

December 31, 2000, 10:27 pm

Maybe he means cymbal - who knows the mind of RG.

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January 1, 2001, 5:14 pm

Sabreson,Sorry about that. I didn't see the no crit warning.Pyotor

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January 1, 2001, 5:40 pm

As your muse is so strong at the moment pyotor, perhaps you might try "stretch the pen"Why don't you visit -All in a pen

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January 2, 2001, 4:41 am

Sabresun, It came to me fast!Re the symbol, simbol, cymbal et al ... oops!One of the handicaps of too fast fingers, too slow mind and on line composition. Hmmm... maybe I could use that old excuse.....

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January 2, 2001, 8:09 am

It lay there. Unused.The cymbal of a mindgone b flat under pressure.Why don't you visit -All in a pen

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January 3, 2001, 4:55 am

Hi RG Well, isn't it a small world? It's Tommy, from salty dreams. I just found this place. Have you seen my site yet? I've sure seen some interesting poetry lately. Talk about poetic obsession! I'm...

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Re: All in a Pen

January 4, 2001, 8:24 am

Thanks for the delightful read - Lae

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